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Dart ref by xDeadpuffx Dart ref by xDeadpuffx
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Name: Dart

Breed Base: Kurdish Kangal/ Canaan Dog/ Beauceron

Age: 4

Gender: Female

Abilities: Nothing special c:

Strengths:
Agile- She is very agile, detoured by very few terrains
Fast- She is very quick on her paws
Cunning- Since she is so fragile she uses this to keep her out of trouble. She uses her cunning to set traps wth her partner against her opponent. (she can be sean as an utter geniouse or a senceless morron)
-Strong jaws

Weaknesses:
- Soft skin her skin is rather soft and her pelt is thin, once she’s hit it can cause major damage.
-Cannot swim
-Lung infection, cannot run for very long or she will become very exhausted, usually to exhausted to run.
-Light bone structure for running, so she is rather fragile.
-Derp, she can follow orders easily but her common sence is low.


Personality: Goofy, spunky, random, social, happy, childish, flirty

History: She was born out in the countrey. For her whole life she lived in solitary, with only her siblings. Always a 'person' dog she loved the company of other canines, and was always advernturouse, when it came to dog parks. When time came and she was adopted, she was shipped all the way from her family in Canada, to a place she had never been before.

Just as her family had settled in, their new home set fire. Her entire new family burned with the home they had just moved too, and Dart was fored to move on. after much wandering throught the cities, she found Pripyat, a place brimming with dogs!

Likes: Sun, flowers, other dogs, showing off

Dislikes: Being looked down on, going too slow, getting lost

Other: She has Heterochromia, on eye is blue and the other is brown. She is also the second oldest of her siblings.
Her ears can flop down, or be half pricked.

Art and Character (C) of me
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, here's our review.

Determination is not a strength, it's a personality trait. Attractive, while I admit I was amused to see it there, isn't a strength either.

Being easily lost and quick to make decisions are also personality traits, and not weaknesses. You also have to remember that swimming in Pripyat would be unwise for anybody, even if they could swim; the river is highly irradiated and swimming in it could make you very ill.

Finally, we're a little confused by one of your weaknesses. You say she has good endurance, but go on to say that after a long run she becomes weak and coughs up blood because of a lung infection. Don't these points contradict?
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xDeadpuffx Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Alright I see she needs work, I couldn't think of any weaknesses that really went with her.


I was thinking she could run for a while, but not for extremely long periods of time. Then after she ran she would be extremely weak and fragile.
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
If that was the case she would not have good endurance. Endurance means you CAN run for long periods of time.

As for weaknesses, there is a list of suggestions on the FAQ.
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xDeadpuffx Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Alrighty
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Cunning isn't a strength either comrade, strengths should be purely physical. Mental strengths go under "personality." And I still need to reinforce that no one in Pripyat is going swimming because that would be a death sentence even if they knew how. However, the ref is balanced now so I'll add her to the group. Good luck.
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xDeadpuffx Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:iconfacepalmplz: I'm just not good at this am I? Haha

Well thanks!
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I noticed this while I was doing your commission, but Dart's blue eye changes sides on the two images. Could you fix this to be more consistent?
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xDeadpuffx Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Yep! I thought something looked off D:
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Silvadruid Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
You could add something along the lines of "stong jaws" in her strengths. She looks like the kind of dog that would hurt a LOT if she bit you.
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xDeadpuffx Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Indeed, added. c:
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